Good Morning from NM. Technical qualities and composition are good, this is a saleable video! You did mention that "transitions" needed improvement. Personal Observation: Abrupt transitions were obvious but having said that, you used zoom type effect by moving the platform in and out from the subject. Do you have an application that would allow "melt," "fold," or "blend," transitions in post editing? The soundtrack was a nice touch, it added to the positive impact of your video. Well Done!