Final Demo Reel For Submission and Graduation in Filmmaking / Cinematography Posted November 6, 2018 · Report reply @MCooogan1 I agree with all of the feedback mentioned above. One of the main things you want to accomplish with a video is a story, no matter what the video is being edited for. Even simple real estate videos need to tell a story. I do like the idea of using stills in the video too, not many people do that and it has to be done just right for it to work. I think a lot of the transitions can be eliminated and some of the shots in the beginning were long. What I really liked is your write up and answering of the questions. You used the course appropriately and answered the questions spot on. You found valuable ways to improve on your next edits and the fact that you did that after just your first edit from the course is great! Overall, nice work making it through the course and getting something very valuable out of it!